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~Out in the Rain~
Contributed by
shelby
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Friday, 6th March 2009 @ 12:03:49 AM in AEST
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Where is the beauty in this cold Pacific North storm?
The nip in the air and the freshness has turned stale.
Wet to the bone and not a prayer to be found,
the dampness soaks through to the bone.
~Out in the rain and a heart turned to stone~
The world has tipped beneath the feet,
soft spongy feel of the ground, drizzle and damp
a soul slips away, not a light to be found.
In a world so large, swallowed hole and a lonely void cannot be filled.
~Out in the rain and a heart turned to stone~
cruel intentions unrestrained, left cold and drained.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2009-03-06 00:03:49]
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Re: ~Out in the Rain~
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th March 2009 @ 01:15:43 AM AEST
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wow, deep... and sad. :-( Let me at em, Michelle... I'll kick their ass.
Anywho, this conveys that kick me when I'm already down feeling. Nicely done but I am sorry to hear things are like ****.
*huge hug*
Tim |
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Re: ~Out in the Rain~
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by funmi on
Friday, 6th March 2009 @ 07:14:50 AM AEST
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| very touching poem....it made me think for a while....very classic...i love it |
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Re: ~Out in the Rain~
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th March 2009 @ 03:36:57 PM AEST
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i can imagine the situation. good poem, the imagery was very vivivd and poignant.
-phil |
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Re: ~Out in the Rain~
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by Recyclebin on
Friday, 6th March 2009 @ 05:53:44 PM AEST
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I felt as if I was in the bitter rain...
And so glad our Shelby is back...
:o)
~BiN~ |
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Re: ~Out in the Rain~
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 6th March 2009 @ 06:18:06 PM AEST
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A wonderful write, Shells....the imagery is spectacular.... Hope you are well..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: ~Out in the Rain~
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by shortney on
Saturday, 7th March 2009 @ 12:19:24 PM AEST
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| that was really good..it made me think. good imagery it's like i was there. |
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