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ode to sea
Contributed by
fortunesdancer
on
Thursday, 5th March 2009 @ 01:50:09 PM in AEST
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Raucous gaggle of birds in flight
the sky stained in flickers of night
i sit there and ponder of you great sea
posieden calypso whatever your name
temptress and god
untamed
wild
but forgiving
your gentle sea breeze caress my face
like silken lace
you gentle yourself as i approach
only to gather yourself in a thunderous rage
like a rabid dog in a cage
oh you tease
oh please let me know you
but no you never do you
your depths are shady filled with mystery
there but not
in all of history
secrets lies
love and betrayle
you have witnessed it all on your great waves
none may demoralise you
as you batter the front
in bombardents wave after wave
never surrender
why are youy so cruel
great sea
depart me your wisdom of ancient times
of storys of good
or storys of crimes
but know you bear your burden anlone
drudging through everything and anything always never stopping or changing
a certinaty in uncertinaty
what cruel lonely fate it must be
i stand there amazed
our sea
great sea
my sea
you will never know love
pain or sorrow
but we can feel it for you
my salty freind
the burden we carry to the end
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2009-03-05 13:50:09]
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Re: ode to sea
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th March 2009 @ 03:46:53 PM AEST
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a very good nature poem. i have rarely read the beauty of the sea expressed as well. the ending was the highlight of the poem for me, great work.
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Re: ode to sea
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by ScorpionFire88 on
Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 02:30:14 PM AEST
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| so deep and meaningful, like the sea. |
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