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Day Dream
Contributed by
MissTeenSuicide
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Thursday, 5th March 2009 @ 08:25:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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A deep breath in
An expression unchanged
Exhale then,
A gesture in vain
The only sign of life
A blink and a sigh
The mind has left the body
In this blink of an eye
A dreamer I am
And it's dream that I do
Dream of hopes and the future
I also dream of you
The mind has left the body
In that one sorrowful sigh
These dreams that are left, ails me
I shall only greet and say good-bye
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2009-03-05 08:25:52]
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Re: Day Dream
(User Rating: 1 )
by tin on
Thursday, 5th March 2009 @ 09:13:38 PM AEST
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| The word dream almost always catches my eye, and i'm glad that this poem did. The flow and rhyme are fantastic in my opinion, keep up the good work. |
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Re: Day Dream
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th October 2009 @ 07:51:27 AM AEST
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Powerful stuff, really intense.
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