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Tossing and Turning
Contributed by
Ambivalence
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Wednesday, 4th March 2009 @ 07:13:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Must be difficult
To fulfill your dreams in such
A realm of nightmares
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Ambivalence
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2009-03-04 19:13:43]
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Re: Tossing and Turning
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 4th March 2009 @ 08:19:30 PM AEST
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Oh wow.... lovely and truth-filled haiku... I miss these haikus of yours... I alway say I need to get back to writing more of them cuz I enjoy them so much... And Yes..I can relate.
Thank you..
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Re: Tossing and Turning
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th March 2009 @ 08:49:19 PM AEST
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wow. I'm with Jenni. This rings so true to most hearts. Just daring to
dream can sometimes be a nightmare in itself. But to actually pursue
the accomplishment of such, can be, well, quite daunting to say the least.
I love a haiku that says so much. It's an arduous task but brilliant when
it turns out so well. :) Great job!
~ Breezy
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Re: Tossing and Turning
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th March 2009 @ 04:22:17 PM AEST
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i can most certainly relate. great work with such few words.
-phil |
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