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waiting..
Contributed by
wazarov
on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 04:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Eternally blinded by those eyes
but secretly I started to bleed..
lost in your desert ..
I can never forget and I `ll be always crying
your ghost will stand between me and every women
i`ll never stop thinking about you
never stop crying for you
and when I stop is the day of my funeral
I had my share of hell already
those flames waiting for us will ease my pain of you
and heaven without you is worse..
Copyright ©
wazarov
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2003-03-24 16:25:00]
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Re: waiting..
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by ThirtyDays on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 04:53:14 PM AEST
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You convey torment in this poem with great symbolism.. "when i stop is the day of my funeral".. and "had my share of hell already" and "heaven without you is worse".
Good poems allow you to experience .. like immersion in a good movie.. I was immersed.
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Re: waiting..
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 12:44:45 AM AEST
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| I love this poem ... can relate to it so well - love the way you express yourself ... the last line is perfect ... Jan |
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Re: waiting..
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by Jaylee123 on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 12:45:45 AM AEST
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| TERRIFIC writing! Whoever you wrote this about is a LUCKY person!!!!!!!! Jaylee |
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Re: waiting..
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 03:52:59 AM AEST
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What an AMAZING poem. Real blood, swaet and tears in the writing. Such emotion. I was hooked from the first line!
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