|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Dear Baby Part 2
Contributed by
recyclebin
on
Monday, 2nd March 2009 @ 09:26:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
|
Standing, watching you soar out of view,
Seems like an eternity has passed, already without you.
I know you will miss me.
But the void just makes us see,
How strong this love really can be.
Just a moment ago
We embraced and said our goodbyes,
Wiping, the tears that fell from your eyes,
So hard, such a short time expressed,
Right now, I’m focusing on how much time we possessed.
I’m thinking how much your touch, means to me
I know how hard this is going to be.
Always know you’re the reason,
That my soul is whole,
like tropical rain forests, need rainy seasons.
You’re the stunning rose that blooms,
In the arctic winter, on a sunny day.
You’re the soft-hearted mint,
That takes my breath away.
You’re the frame that keeps
My heart from breaking in two.
The sediment that layers and
forms the foundation that I stand on.
No matter how long, no matter the distance ,
This romance will last; like timeless existence.
I will be waiting impatiently for your swift return,
Not soon enough is my only concern.
Soon you will be touching me,
holding me, once again, you will be loving me.
Swollen red eyes, keeping my tears shrouded
Lifting my heay head
I watch you disappear into the clouds.
Sending you telepathic thought;
Before you drift into your dreams
a gentle breeze may cross your face
Do not fret though;
For it’s just me, blowing you a kiss
From this distant place.
Love you baby
Copyright ©
recyclebin
... [
2009-03-02 21:26:58]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Dear Baby Part 2
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on
Monday, 2nd March 2009 @ 10:03:31 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Wow Bin....What a declaration of love!! This is so sweet...so beautiully written... I love it..
Jenni
|
|
|
Re: Dear Baby Part 2
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd March 2009 @ 10:39:11 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Aw, man!!! An excellent write about missing "her". This is genuine. This is beautiful. Very impressive.
May I also be so bold to say your writing is definitely improving?
Thank you for sharing this with the rest of us.
Tim
|
|
|
Re: Dear Baby Part 2
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd March 2009 @ 08:07:04 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
a stunning write. it was passionate, beautiful and vivid. i'll just let it speak for itself:
'like tropical rain forests, need rainy seasons.
You’re the stunning rose that blooms,
In the arctic winter, on a sunny day.
You’re the soft-hearted mint,
That takes my breath away.
You’re the frame that keeps
My heart from breaking in two.'
i wonder if even you know how good this bit is, it's world class. a wonderful poem.
-phil
|
|
|
Re: Dear Baby Part 2
(User Rating: 1 )
by PreciousKitten on
Tuesday, 3rd March 2009 @ 08:59:13 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| i love it. you showing your love in the poem really packs a punch in it. i really liked it. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
