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Her Laugh
Contributed by
lnnie
on
Monday, 2nd March 2009 @ 07:21:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Her laugh
was the smell
of newly washed linens;
fresh cut grass
child smiles
gypsy dances
the green spot at sunset
how Niagara Falls sounds
when you get close on the bus
crunchy snow
good molasses pouring
a special touch
from one you love
joy ringing in certain church songs
happy eyes from babies,
giggles too,
the sigh, that special sigh
after love-making
an unexpected compliment
that makes you go wow
quiet nights
Really really good chocolate
Music in your bedroom late at night
A look from someone you want that look from.
But most of all
she laughs
like she
likes you
and she does.
Like that.
That is her laugh.
Copyright ©
lnnie
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2009-03-02 19:21:38]
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Re: Her Laugh
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd March 2009 @ 08:01:36 AM AEST
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so many wonderful images in this, a joy to read, great work.
-phil |
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Re: Her Laugh
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by elle on
Tuesday, 3rd March 2009 @ 12:48:28 PM AEST
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| I really, really like. . . great write! elle |
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Re: Her Laugh
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 3rd March 2009 @ 10:40:29 PM AEST
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| ooh this flows so heavenly |
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Re: Her Laugh
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by kye on
Sunday, 8th March 2009 @ 10:22:03 AM AEST
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I have been reading thru your poetry. You write so vividly, that an artist could compose paintings - just by reading your words.
You have an artistic creative mind - that is what I see in your poetry. It is one of the greatest gifts bestowed on very few.
"Her Laugh" is wonderful, so wonderful.
Thank you Innie.
Kie |
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