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My Favorite View of Sunset
Contributed by
thepizzaguy
on
Monday, 2nd March 2009 @ 02:14:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My favorite view of sunset,
Is not from a high mountain.
It is not from the top of the Grand Canyon,
Looking down on God’s creation.
Nor is it from a helicopter,
Flying high above a beautiful city.
My favorite view of sunset,
Is not from a beach in Southern California.
Nor is it from a riverboat on its approach,
To the gulf of Mexico.
My favorite view of sunset,
Is not from the crest of the initial hill,
Of a twisting, winding, roller coaster.
Nor is it from a bridge,
As my car crosses over lake Erie.
Some say that my favorite view of sunset,
Is not really a view of the sunset,
Because my favorite view of the sunset,
Is the reflection that it sets in your eyes.
As the sky burns its glorious hue of RedOrangeYellowBlue
It dances with the beautiful color of your eyes
Waltzing and shifting
Shifting and waltzing
Ending my day,
With the most beautiful
Stunning
Radiant display
Of God’s presence
Manifested on this Earth
Copyright ©
thepizzaguy
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2009-03-02 14:14:22]
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Re: My Favorite View of Sunset
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd March 2009 @ 02:57:19 PM AEST
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wow, incredible. the imagery was magnificent and it was such a passionate, heartfelt write. i especially loved the ending, fantastic work.
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Re: My Favorite View of Sunset
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 2nd March 2009 @ 04:42:50 PM AEST
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...And what a spin it is!!! A stunning write with some very beautiful imagery...
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Re: My Favorite View of Sunset
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd March 2009 @ 11:17:51 PM AEST
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And I see you were quite successful at it!!!! I loved reading this and found it quite creative.
Thank you for an enjoyable read and sharing it with the rest of us.
Tim |
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