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Lost and lonely smile
Contributed by
purplestary
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Sunday, 1st March 2009 @ 08:57:05 PM in AEST
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I can't remember how to smile anymore
I knew how a long time ago
But life tore away every laugh line
I was forced to learn how to paint.
I'm not sad, I'm just trying to learn.
I'm not mad, I'm just determined.
I'm just here, searching for my smile
I have washed away those false emotions
But they've been replaced with blank stares
I can't remember how to smile.
I can't remember how to feel.
I'm not sad, I'm just trying to learn.
I'm not mad, I'm just determined.
I'm just here, searching for my smile
I practice in the mirror sometimes
But I walk away, because I look rediculous
So now I'm begging god since he is so powerfull
I'm down on my knees, waiting for a cure.
I'm not sad, I'm just trying to lean
I'm not mad, I'm just determined
I'm just here, searching for my smile.
While I wait for god to answer
I'm going to keep searching
so if anyone sees a lost, and lonly smile,
Take it by the hand and lead it home.
I'm not sad, I'm just trying to learn
I'm not mad, I'm just determined
I'm just here, searching for my smile.
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Re: Lost and lonely smile
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 1st March 2009 @ 09:27:40 PM AEST
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Good to see you posting again...and as I see it, you're well on your way to finding that smile again.... I really enjoyed reading this...
Jenni |
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Re: Lost and lonely smile
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd March 2009 @ 06:11:47 AM AEST
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good writing, you have a nice style.
-phil |
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Re: Lost and lonely smile
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd March 2009 @ 09:32:25 PM AEST
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| Now that was really nice and I enjoyed reading it. It would appear the writers block has disappeared. |
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Re: Lost and lonely smile
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by PreciousKitten on
Tuesday, 3rd March 2009 @ 09:03:24 AM AEST
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| this poem really does impress me. i like it. keep on rockin. |
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Re: Lost and lonely smile
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 06:39:56 PM AEST
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excellent style and flow, lovely poem,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Lost and lonely smile
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by Loende on
Saturday, 5th September 2009 @ 09:01:01 AM AEST
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You know... I get it, I really do. Both the block and
the truth and frustration in this piece. Why are
we all in such a bloody hurry to grow up? Because
inevitably when we get there, we've already forgotten
how to smile.
Nice piece and I too am glad your block has given
up the ghost for now. Thank you for sharing it!
Be well,
~Loende |
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Re: Lost and lonely smile
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by Jazzyfizzle on
Sunday, 28th February 2010 @ 10:22:22 PM AEST
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"I practice in the mirror sometimes
But I walk away, because I look rediculous"
if only you knew how brillant of a line that is, mind blowing...it might be just for me but nonetheless...still amazing. |
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