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The Dreamless
Contributed by
kismetkills
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Sunday, 1st March 2009 @ 03:57:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
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As easy as the lock snaps,
As quiet as the tree in moonlight,
Is a blue dream in a still mind,
A living breathing thought it is,
But only a thought, but only a dream,
Not worth a cent to you or I,
Because our locks stay opened,
And our moonlight is shadowed,
Here we are, here are the dreamless,
Lurking in the darkest corners.
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kismetkills
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2009-03-01 03:57:24]
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Re: The Dreamless
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st March 2009 @ 12:50:16 PM AEST
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there was some lovely imagery in here, good work.
-phil |
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Re: The Dreamless
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by ScorpionFire88 on
Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 02:31:45 PM AEST
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| Very dark. Reminds me of a song i heard before.... |
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