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In your life time
Contributed by
fanniesson
on
Saturday, 28th February 2009 @ 08:03:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Unless you jump off a roof fly away.,
odds are you won't do anything new
in your lifetime worth remembering
by the masses.
With apologies to those
'Guinness World Book Record Holders',
that lady with the twelve inch waist,
the other one who can't pick her nose
cause of the length of her fingernails,
and those other assorted freaks.
You won't do anything new
in your life time.
So don't let it eat at you.
We're all in the same boat here.
Only a handful of us get to jump
fly away
to the amazement of others.
Copyright ©
fanniesson
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2009-02-28 20:03:37] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: In your life time
(User Rating: 1 ) by Fireheart on
Saturday, 28th February 2009 @ 08:35:15 PM AEST (User
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i like the first few stanzas caught my attention. nicely done indeed. i liked it. keep it up |
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Re: In your life time
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Sunday, 1st March 2009 @ 06:11:17 AM AEST (User
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Aww. you are correct, we can't pick the nose of a lady when her finger nails are lengthy....ha,ha..
I enjoyed this write..
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Re: In your life time
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st March 2009 @ 02:01:34 PM AEST (User
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harsh, but true. refreshing writing.
-phil |
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