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But What A Beautiful Lie
Contributed by
fireheart
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Saturday, 28th February 2009 @ 05:47:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Days go by.
Time flies right by me.
Standing in the same damn place.
With a smile showing now and then.
Raining invisible tears.
Everyone guesses I'm alright.
Cause that stupid smile on my face.
Those few dumb laughs you hear.
All come in a price to pay.
Dying every moment I'm breathing.
Biting my lips from crying.
Holding myself in place.
Trying to break free from this place that surrounds me.
So days go by.
Everyone sees I'm alright.
But what a beautiful lie.
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fireheart
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2009-02-28 17:47:43]
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Re: But What A Beautiful Lie
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by loveisendless on
Saturday, 28th February 2009 @ 10:05:17 PM AEST
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| WOW,IT'S LIKE I CAN SEE THE LOOK ON YOUR FACE BY READING THIS-A GREAT WRITE!! |
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Re: But What A Beautiful Lie
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by Loende on
Saturday, 28th February 2009 @ 11:36:33 PM AEST
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Dying every moment I'm breathing.
There's a lot of substance to this short piece. You've hit the nail right on the head with how I'm feeling of late. Fabulous line there. Great job and thank you for sharing it with us all.
Be well,
~Loende |
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Re: But What A Beautiful Lie
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st March 2009 @ 06:26:07 AM AEST
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Great job capturing a state of mind with few words!
I can relate as I wear that mask way to often. |
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Re: But What A Beautiful Lie
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by Recyclebin on
Sunday, 1st March 2009 @ 02:26:01 PM AEST
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nice write of inner struggle.
But always remember, sadness only makes one desire happiness.
~Bin~ |
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Re: But What A Beautiful Lie
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by Recyclebin on
Sunday, 1st March 2009 @ 02:28:45 PM AEST
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Oh and I would like to add one more comment
And just like a "beautiful lie" wants to tell the "ugly truth".
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Re: But What A Beautiful Lie
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th March 2009 @ 08:10:02 PM AEST
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great writing. it was frank, honest and startling. the imagery was vivid and creative. good work.
-phil |
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