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The LIfe Of A Man
Contributed by
bbking
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Friday, 27th February 2009 @ 10:09:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
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How does a man that has no past, determine his future?
How does a man that has never loved, learn to marry?
How does a man trapped in the darkness, find the light?
How does a man that has so many questions, find his answers?
How does a man that has never lived, have a life?
If any of these questions relate to you,
then you are me, I am you and we are the same.
I have walked this road for a long time in wonder,
still looking for it"s meaning.
I have found many potholes on this road,
but none the less I still walk.
Because my future still holds more for me,
and curiosity won't let me drift away,
but how many times must a man show his endurance before he reaps its benefits.
I have learned that life will twist you, throw you, and mangle you.
Life is not easy.
Life is always rooting against you,
but I will not give up.
I am man, I am human,
and we were created in the beauty to overcome these rigurous struggles.
I will not stop, nor slow down,
because life doesn't take a break.
so why should I?
Copyright ©
bbking
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2009-02-27 22:09:03]
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Re: The LIfe Of A Man
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 27th February 2009 @ 10:40:04 PM AEST
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Potent questions.... A good lesson to be learnt here... Looking forward to more of your wisdom here on YPDC...Welcome..
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Re: The LIfe Of A Man
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by venkat on
Monday, 2nd March 2009 @ 08:31:44 PM AEST
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"we were created in the beauty to overcome these rigurous struggles"...Ah thats good,
dear man,you need not stop any where, then only you can find greater beauty in the life..
God bless..write more and more.. best of luck!..
venkat
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Re: The LIfe Of A Man
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by Ess3nc3 on
Wednesday, 11th March 2009 @ 12:08:19 AM AEST
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| Yet another astute piece of literature. I admire your writing style my friend. You have a very philosophical way of wording things. I found only one mistake, a spelling error in the 4th verse from the bottom. "Rigurous," should be spelled, "Rigorous." Other than that, absolutely flawless and very intellectual. |
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Re: The LIfe Of A Man
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by wapalu55 on
Sunday, 3rd April 2011 @ 06:22:31 PM AEST
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| excellent writing |
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Re: The LIfe Of A Man
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by wapalu55 on
Sunday, 3rd April 2011 @ 06:22:32 PM AEST
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| excellent writing |
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