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Burning Love
Contributed by
TUNA530
on
Friday, 27th February 2009 @ 09:43:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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On this cold and fearful night,
The air is thin, the fire bright.
By the howling wind, my eyes start to shed,
And I fear my own life is at its end.
But even when I know that’s true,
I would die to spend my last moment with you.
Your deep blue eyes look into mine,
My body, it stops thick in time.
Your eyes, so sweetly I feel
That I could jump in that pool of teal.
As our life is on its peak,
The flames reach and I hear a shriek.
Burning woman next to me, she’s still so lovely.
Even in death she speaks to me.
Her beauty fades, her eyes shut tight.
Then we leave from the light.
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TUNA530
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2009-02-27 21:43:25]
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Re: Burning Love
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 27th February 2009 @ 10:31:22 PM AEST
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This flowed well except for a line or two.. I really enjoyed reading it... Welcome to YPDC. Looking forward to reading more of your work...
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Re: Burning Love
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by snoopington on
Sunday, 1st March 2009 @ 09:08:26 AM AEST
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| really liked the flow to this write well done keep it up hope to hear more from you |
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