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Gone
Contributed by
shendo
on
Friday, 27th February 2009 @ 04:23:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Looking at the picture forced to portray.
making me remember those old days.
When I had a voice,
that could make a sound
I sold myself so cheap
I let you get too deep
now my eyes grow so weak
I now go for my final sleep.
in this dream its me and you
we find ourselves with nothing to do
so we gaze under the stars.
there is still light in the dark.
on your neck the jewel I gave to you
also the words I promised too.
now that the feelings are done
you wont miss me until im gone.
Copyright ©
shendo
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2009-02-27 16:23:37] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Gone
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ambivalence on
Friday, 27th February 2009 @ 05:15:18 PM AEST (User
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could definitely relate to this. very succinct but effective with ur mesage/emotion. love can be ur best friend or worst enemy (esp. after broken relationship). but of course, we must go on better than before. take care
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