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breath
Contributed by
sparrow6
on
Friday, 27th February 2009 @ 01:50:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Breath
Without-
One shies of simple
life,
Bliss-held warm existence
With-
Illustrious core energy
Beams unfiltered
Cellular cognition
Radiates unworldly lumens
Grin melts from waxy hold
Smiles expound
Sweet tasty curls
[Your]
Circulation creates
This honey-dewed flow
I Thank You,
Inherent breath
Oh, Dear Sweet Rhapsodist
This soul is pure
In knowing,
Deeply wrapped
In Golden Awe...
Of You.
Loving Peace
Copyright ©
sparrow6
... [
2009-02-27 13:50:02]
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Re: breath
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th February 2009 @ 04:21:30 PM AEST
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a dazzling, extraordinary write. it covered a deeper sense of love that i have been trying to write about as well. simply brilliant.
-phil |
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Re: breath
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by Fireheart on
Saturday, 28th February 2009 @ 05:43:17 PM AEST
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| awww... i love it. powerful indeed. i love the last few stanzas n a nice way closing your piece here. |
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