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ONCE AGAIN
Contributed by
brokenwings
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Thursday, 26th February 2009 @ 11:39:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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a womans heart holds the secrets deeper than deep,
her eyes show what her heart refuses to say
so hold her tight when she cries
don' t let go even when you think its too much
cuz someone somewhere has let go before
as her heart grows closer to you
her eyes remember being left when she needed the most
don't let her anger, her pain, or her love slip away
cuz in her anger she carries passion,
in her pain she carries love
and in her love is something more real more pure
its something worth holding on to,
when she has tears in her eyes, tell her to cry
and stay right there cuz the secrets of the deep show themselves
when she's fighting to keep them in, in her hearts rage
they all take center stage,
she's not looking for prince charming, she knows thats fake
she's only begging for love, for honesty, for strength
that she can only find in loves arms,,,,
love to fix her heart
honesty to tell her the truth even when it hurts
and the strength to love completely
ONCE AGAIN...
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brokenwings
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Re: ONCE AGAIN
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by tin on
Thursday, 26th February 2009 @ 11:47:59 PM AEST
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| It didn't seem so choppy to me, but maybe i write choppy and don't realise? either way i like it. wonderfully written with a sound message. |
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Re: ONCE AGAIN
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 27th February 2009 @ 07:10:01 AM AEST
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Finally...here is a person who knows and appreciates the heart of a woman!! Excellent job..
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Re: ONCE AGAIN
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th February 2009 @ 08:19:53 AM AEST
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amazing. you voiced my feelings about women so perfectly with this. women need to be loved, not treated like a sculpture with no soul. wonderful poetry.
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