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Bruises of Love
Contributed by
makeshift_2134
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Thursday, 26th February 2009 @ 12:14:12 AM in AEST
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She loves him so much and it's all that she knows.
A constant attention that stops and then flows.
She loves him so much, it's just his wild ways.
So she treasures the bruises like others hold days.
"It's the drink" he says. Apology implied.
Then the rage comes back and she knows that he lied.
But she loves him so much and it's all that she knows.
The punches, the kicks, and the life that fate chose.
Soon there will be darkness. She knows it's the truth.
Another split lip, another lost tooth.
The wailing of children admist all her woes.
But she loves him so much and it's all that she knows.
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Re: Bruises of Love
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by emystar on
Thursday, 26th February 2009 @ 03:13:41 AM AEST
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She needs to learn to luv herself.
Good writing.
Very sad but it happens.
This reminds me of O.J. Simpson.
At least now he sees what it's like in prison of course, I'm sure he want be there nearly long enuff.
huggs, blessings,
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Re: Bruises of Love
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by texasw97 on
Thursday, 26th February 2009 @ 07:25:08 AM AEST
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| This was deep. I like it. Take care. |
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Re: Bruises of Love
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by amber_vonHorror on
Friday, 27th February 2009 @ 12:03:22 AM AEST
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wow i really really liked this
it flowed really well and the message was very strong.
good job and take care. |
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