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Velvet Skies
Contributed by
jnep
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Wednesday, 25th February 2009 @ 04:07:48 PM in AEST
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LovePoetry
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Reminiscing, Memories echoing around my head
Alone, we solemnly sleep in our bed.
Our hearts beating together. frozen in the hallways of my mind
A single moment together etched in the hands of time.
Lady, How beautiful you are, I still cannot comprehend
Trumpets soar and my heart cheers for this Angel he did send.
Under a blue moon, you illuminate the skies
If you only saw yourself through mine eyes.
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jnep
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2009-02-25 16:07:48]
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Re: Velvet Skies
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by Mars on
Wednesday, 25th February 2009 @ 10:29:04 PM AEST
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| I'm not sure what I really like, but I like it =P. The last line is my favorite. I can relate. If only she could see how she really looked to me. I couldn't say it any better than you said it. |
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Re: Velvet Skies
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th February 2009 @ 07:51:08 AM AEST
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i loved the 'frozen in the hallways of my mind' line, that worked really well. nice poem overall, very deep and heartfelt.
-phil |
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