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Contributed by
lnnie
on
Wednesday, 25th February 2009 @ 03:16:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I have submitted to
what I should not have submitted to;
taken at times
what was not mine.
I have subscribed to
what I knew
was not true;
yet remained quiet
still;
afraid.
I've carried water
for that Other
while weak from thirst myself.
I've cast my eyes down
from exhaustion
and looked away
when I shouldn't have.
Yet
in all this
I have never faltered
from loving you.
Never once has your light
left my face;
my heart
from this home and space
we've shared.
My weaknesses
true
are many;
but my love for you
is my Monument-
and I'm Yours.
Copyright ©
lnnie
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2009-02-25 15:16:39]
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Re: Submit
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th February 2009 @ 07:48:32 AM AEST
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i loved your honesty in this piece, and i think the ending was very powerful. great work.
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Re: Submit
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by kye on
Thursday, 26th February 2009 @ 06:50:29 PM AEST
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I saw a glimpse of a very giving person who touched my heart.
It is a poem that the reader can easily relate to and well.... just feel.
It's a lovely, honest and uniquely expressed poem.
I feel lucky to have found it. Thank you.
Kie |
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