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~Whisper To Me~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
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Wednesday, 25th February 2009 @ 02:28:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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~~^~~
Whisper to me the words I love to hear,
Let your sweet, sensual voice float through the air.
Whisper words that tell me how much you care,
Whisper them darling, softly in my ear.
Whisper to me when you池e feeling blue,
Whisper to me what you壇 like me to do.
I値l do anything to make you feel right,
We値l make love under the pale moonlight.
I値l whisper to you where I need your touch,
I値l let you know that I need it so much.
The winds will carry our thoughts across the sea,
While we take each other to pure ecstasy.
Tell me again that you love me so true,
And that you will always want me with you.
Love me darling, till I知 no longer blue,
That is all I will ever ask of you
~~^~~
Copyright ﾂｩ
Jenni_K
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2009-02-25 14:28:06]
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Re: ~Whisper To Me~
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 25th February 2009 @ 03:40:46 PM AEST
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jen, this write is intoxacating, tantalized,sweet, beautiful, awesome write.
I've missed your romantic writes.
Big huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: ~Whisper To Me~
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 25th February 2009 @ 08:24:47 PM AEST
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What a beautiful poem and
i love the flow, magnificent
as always, a treat for the
artistic heart . . .
Thank you like wise my friend
for your words of appreciation . . .
Ben |
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Re: ~Whisper To Me~
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by Mars on
Wednesday, 25th February 2009 @ 10:34:24 PM AEST
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| I nice mixture of classic love poem and dark, velvet undertone. Very, very nice. |
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Re: ~Whisper To Me~
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 25th February 2009 @ 11:15:19 PM AEST
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Aww..Jenny.. I love this poem.. so beautifully expresses the whispers of a heart
and the anguish of unextinguished fire of love and the mind's desire.
love and hugs.:-) venkat |
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Re: ~Whisper To Me~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th February 2009 @ 11:33:53 PM AEST
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I think it came from the same place as your Dancing In The Dark!!! Which, imo, is a totally awesome place.
*applauds*
Tim |
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Re: ~Whisper To Me~
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by Recyclebin on
Thursday, 26th February 2009 @ 12:39:14 AM AEST
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Wow Miss Jenni that is steamy, this poem is a classic. Excellent write.
God you have me whispering sweet nothings,
*whispers* Thank you for sharing!
~Bin~ |
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Re: ~Whisper To Me~
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th February 2009 @ 07:46:26 AM AEST
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highly sensual and visual, an explosion of different emotions and images. quite simply, brilliant.
-phil |
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Re: ~Whisper To Me~
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by deadwriter on
Thursday, 26th February 2009 @ 03:24:48 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful write.
Very well done.
Deadwriter
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Re: ~Whisper To Me~
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by kye on
Thursday, 26th February 2009 @ 06:44:49 PM AEST
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GORGEOUS!! Truly.
It is the kind of poem with that right touch of sentiment, sensuality and intimacy that is so needed sometimes-- just to tell a special person--just how special they are.
I also think this poem has song potential. It is gorgeous and perfect. (I am repeating myself because this poem is a special one)
Well done.!!
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Re: ~Whisper To Me~
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Friday, 3rd April 2009 @ 02:49:35 PM AEST
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| very nicely written, makes me want to whisper too |
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