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Afghanistan
Contributed by
navydocny
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Wednesday, 25th February 2009 @ 12:42:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The dying lion
Gold now sullen with war’s dust
It waits at the Kush
Copyright ©
navydocny
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2009-02-25 12:42:58]
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Re: Afghanistan
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by elle on
Wednesday, 25th February 2009 @ 01:57:42 PM AEST
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| profound & tragically beautiful. . . peace. elle |
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Re: Afghanistan
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by khan on
Wednesday, 25th February 2009 @ 01:57:55 PM AEST
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Beautiful lines
too meaningful
i wish the peace prevails
and the lion lives
with its dignity and
grace |
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Re: Afghanistan
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 25th February 2009 @ 02:20:35 PM AEST
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Well done, as always...and I look forward to reading more... Take care of yourself...
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Re: Afghanistan
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th February 2009 @ 10:40:40 PM AEST
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Dude, not a very good move. They should be moving you home instead!
Very sad Haiku.
Take care of yourself!!!!
Tim |
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Re: Afghanistan
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th February 2009 @ 07:43:58 AM AEST
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succinct and beautiful, great work with such few words.
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