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(edited) you all!
Contributed by
justlearning69
on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 01:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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When I was left dying,
The masses were crying,
And no-one knew
How to love anymore.
The moment was instant.
The Pain quickly stopped,
When a body's no soul,
The corpse quickly rots.
The Pyre was built high,
The flames quickly burned,
When the fun was all over,
The crowds heads all turned,
Who laughed when I Cried?
Who Laughed when I Died?
I Promised to haunt them
They thought that I Lied!
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justlearning69
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2003-03-24 01:45:00]
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Re: (edited) you all!
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 11:18:49 AM AEST
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interesting write
Sharon |
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Re: (edited) you all!
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by kitten1785 on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 02:27:45 PM AEST
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| I really liked the way you wrote this one. i love dark poetry and i can feel this poem at this point in time. good write |
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Re: (edited) you all!
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by kolbrun on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 07:51:44 AM AEST
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ohh my goodness i really enjoyed reading this poem!!!!! it was put together very nicley!!!! definately something i would reccoment others to read!!!
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