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Same Coin
Contributed by
Spike
on
Tuesday, 24th February 2009 @ 01:21:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
didactic
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Here’s the taste of freedom
bitter on the tongue
the sweet song of innocence
silent and unsung
wondrous raptures of the heart
beating down to nought
the hopes of the ages
forgotten and unsought
Yet:
there shines a light of passion
blinding in its rays
the joy of the knowing
that looks to better days
the wonder of the moment
held in fresher eyes
and memories of the moments
that leave us sore but wise.
Copyright ©
Spike
... [
2009-02-24 01:21:24]
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Re: Same Coin
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th February 2009 @ 01:38:28 AM AEST
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Growing up, trouble times, life experiences, that teach us and then turn to hope...? hopefully. Funny, I was thinking about optimism just before I read this / discovered this. Nicely done.
Take care,
Tim |
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Re: Same Coin
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th February 2009 @ 08:17:01 AM AEST
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very intelligent writing spike. you said the blindingly obvious, but in a unique and witty way. good work.
-phil |
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Re: Same Coin
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 25th February 2009 @ 12:59:32 AM AEST
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A flowing and beautiful write, done with wit and honesty. I love the picture too.
Ahh yes what Tim said, hope that little word that can elude the best of us at times. Positive and insightful write......
Hugs to ya
Michelle |
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Re: Same Coin
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by Ambivalence on
Wednesday, 25th February 2009 @ 12:32:16 PM AEST
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nice...a lil bit of both sadness/pain and joy/hope. that's life rite there. i got that soothing feeling at the end, leaving on a good note...take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: Same Coin
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by kismetkills on
Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 05:07:06 AM AEST
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| ooo i love that, really kickass job! |
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Re: Same Coin
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by crmnlilbruno on
Tuesday, 14th April 2009 @ 10:46:43 PM AEST
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| Great Write! Loved it, easy to read and a good flow, keep up the good work |
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Re: Same Coin
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by Writing4Him on
Thursday, 4th June 2009 @ 07:34:05 AM AEST
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| Good flow, and a simple yet nicely worded point. Brilliant! |
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Re: Same Coin
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by MorguesMatter on
Tuesday, 3rd November 2009 @ 03:54:15 AM AEST
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| I do believe freedom is a state of mind, this poem provided very acute inspiration-Morgues |
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