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Fallen Angel
Contributed by
Petals_and_Tears
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Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 10:01:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Fallen angel;
lost her wings,
lost her way.
Losing all control.
Losing all direction.
Grabbing at the clouds
in vain
as she falls.
Crying out tears
in pain
as she falls.
Screaming out words
in hope
as she falls.
Destiny was never kind,
not even to angels.
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2009-02-23 22:01:01] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Fallen Angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th February 2009 @ 01:07:57 AM AEST (User
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Wow, you have definitely captured a desperate moment here with this one. Even though it is very sad, it is beautifully written. I think you really drive home that feeling of despair with the repetition of as she falls . Nicely done.
Take care and I really do hope it gets better for that fallen angel.
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