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Yearning
Contributed by
crow6279
on
Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 12:09:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Are they dreams or a yearning
These visons I have
The scents that surround me
The touches of comfort and flame
They all seem so real
Her breath on my warming skin
Her angelic face in my hands
Her soft lips kissing mine
Silken hair cascades through my fingers
Her arms holding me close
I feel her heartbeat booming
As mine races to keep time
I look into the depths of her eyes
They sparkle...dazzle...shine
Peering deep down inside of me
As I willingly bare my soul
Her soft voice finds me rapt
Whispering sweet thoughts to me
Filling me with passion and desire
'til I can hear nothing more
They brighten my darkest days
Consuming my lonely nights
These visions I have
These dreams I bid welcome
I've been here before...days past
The memories never fail to linger
I find myself counting the seconds
Longing to remember again
From moment to moment to moment
And times upon countless times
To make them all come true
Is all that I'm asking
Are they dreams or a yearning
These visions I have
My heart...it keeps asking
Crying out its hunger for more
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Re: Yearning
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by shelby on
Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 06:03:31 PM AEST
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You have captured such a softness and longing in this write. Deeply moving and beautiful my friend.
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Re: Yearning
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 08:58:25 PM AEST
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| This is a Really good poem! Keep up the great work! |
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Re: Yearning
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th February 2009 @ 07:51:29 AM AEST
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you captured the sense of yearning perfectly with this work. the dreams, the images flashing through your mind, the anticipation, the disappointment, the irritation that there is no substance to it all. a superb write!
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Re: Yearning
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Tuesday, 24th February 2009 @ 02:26:36 PM AEST
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I truly enjoyed this write. It pulled my heartstrings. ... the images that filled my minds eye were truly amazing. Thank you for such a beautiful piece.
Peace
~Shannon |
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Re: Yearning
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by MoonlightKiss on
Wednesday, 25th February 2009 @ 12:30:41 PM AEST
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This is really deep and down to earth... I love it... *sigh*
Keep writing crow, you're great |
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Re: Yearning
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by matt_the_ninja on
Friday, 27th February 2009 @ 09:23:28 PM AEST
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| It is tragic to fall in love, only to wake up and realize it was all just a dream. Your words capture the essence of what it is to dream of love, and then to lose it all with the alarm clock. |
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