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Everything Reminds Me Of Her
Contributed by
Courchesne
on
Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 09:32:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Every left I take, I see my heart ache
there's not one place i can go
to get away or even hide so
this empty hurt always grows
tipping the typical suicidal woes
everything reminds me of her
even the empty leaves when they stir
i want to get away, so far away
no where to run so must i stay?
there is no one for me today
don't say i broke your heart
you broke your own from the start
I'm tired of having to always be smart
doesn't anyone see my pride and joy
the lost screams of a lonely boy
I've looked into your eyes
seen the make-up running
heard all the full lies
my soul you'll be shunning
until it finally dies.
Everything reminds me of her.
everything makes me feel
our finally good-bye
she'll never be able to heal
there will never be another deal.
cause the hurts to bad
all my life is to long to remain sad
I am all cleaned out
unable to shout.
Everything reminds me of her.
get rid of this bad thought
and run, run so far
to the nearest bar
its all that i got.
and everything reminds me of her.
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Courchesne
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2009-02-23 09:32:48]
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Re: Everything Reminds Me Of Her
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 10:08:50 AM AEST
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i know the feeling very well. i liked the structure and the flow of this piece, good work.
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Re: Everything Reminds Me Of Her
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by MoonlightKiss on
Wednesday, 25th February 2009 @ 12:38:22 PM AEST
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Aww... So sweet but heartbreaking at the same time...
If this was truly about a girl, if you showed this to her, I'm sure she'd love it. I know I did. What girl can deny poetry? Especially by such a good poet.
Great job, I loved it :)
~MK |
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Re: Everything Reminds Me Of Her
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by Puppy on
Thursday, 26th February 2009 @ 09:14:33 AM AEST
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i feel your pain and can relate....
great write though.. :)
Puppy :) |
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