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meaningless
Contributed by
elle
on
Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 09:08:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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a promise
made to me
is as a web
lost
in the breeze
. . .
is it not?
why
so meaningless?
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-02-23 09:08:15]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: meaningless
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 09:19:46 AM AEST
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i think the metaphor was very appropriate, good work.
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Re: meaningless
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 08:52:43 PM AEST
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I absolutely love the way you have this knack of saying so much with so little. Excellent. This makes us want to question those types that can so easily make those promises and then turn around and break them. We want to understand but cannot. Keep it up. You have a gift.
Take care,
Tim |
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Re: meaningless
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by HonestInk on
Saturday, 28th February 2009 @ 06:04:40 PM AEST
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I feel like you wrote through my eyes. Lots of meaning in such few words. Great poem!
-Honest |
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Re: meaningless
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by lnnie on
Tuesday, 3rd March 2009 @ 02:09:43 PM AEST
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You have a way of saying it
so powerfully in so few words.
I once had a similar thought
but couldn't put it into words.
You did so here.
Great.
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