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Beyond the Birches
Contributed by
rosebud
on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 12:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Beyond the birches,
on a far-away hill.
A small house sits,
forever still.
Overhead, the birds fly,
voicing their joyous trill.
Beyond the birches
on a far-away hill.
A serene brook
with its water exceedingly still.
Beyond the birches
on a far-away hill.
Someday, I want to live
in the house so still.
Beyond the birches,
on a far-away hill.
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rosebud
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2003-03-24 00:45:00]
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Re: Beyond the Birches
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 04:26:51 AM AEST
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| wonderful use of imagery! |
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Re: Beyond the Birches
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 11:24:06 AM AEST
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beautifully vivid enjoyable write
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Re: Beyond the Birches
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by Broken-glass on
Wednesday, 20th August 2003 @ 06:56:26 PM AEST
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| Very inspiring. I like the part about the water being exceedingly still. What an interesting word!! |
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