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The End
Contributed by
Onslaught
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Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 01:19:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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The World is Falling apart around me
And I'm pretty sure everyone can see it
It's pretty unbelievably obvious
And if you can't
well just wait until the drug induced stupor fades away
But then again, that's why you do it don't you?
But you wake up, go to work, feeling productive
Have a laugh or two
Have a drink or two
And start again the next day
Everything is fine
Until it all goes bang
In your face
And then darkness
You are being deceived
Why do people do it?
Wicked crazyness
They think there really are forces out there
that we can't possibly comprehend
But what is so hard to understand
You're an idiot
The end
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Onslaught
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2009-02-23 01:19:55]
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Re: The End
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 09:31:52 AM AEST
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i loved the frankness and directness of your writing. the ending epitomised this. good work.
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Re: The End
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by lostrelic on
Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 04:27:43 PM AEST
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They are not idiots but just fed into the lies of man, they can not help hiding with drugs as the fear of there own reality is to much for most. i do agree we are at the grande illusion but the funny thing about it is there is many with the same voice we are just to consumed with our own pride to look for others to make a cause.
i am with you and will not walk behind but beside as no person is greater then an other. |
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Re: The End
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 08:59:33 PM AEST
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Wow, blunt honesty. I absolutely love this. I could really feel the anger.
Tim |
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