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Possessed Poet
Contributed by
recyclebin
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Sunday, 22nd February 2009 @ 11:40:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Click clack Click Clack Owwh Owwh
The demons surround me,
Click clack Click Clack Owwh Owwh
Beating drums, dancing,
All in a circular path.
Twisting, like veins of ancient tribesman,
My eyes transfixed,
Of untainted white marble.
pen flaming, streaming beams
Emitting on each stroke,
Back and forth, back and forth
Click Clack Click Clack Owwh Owwh
body swaying, head bobbling
With the rhythm of the war drums.
No one is safe,
Choice or truth,
Poison from the tree.
Click Clack Click Clack Owwh Owwh
We have had our chance
The glance of the bow comes,
Along with the crown.
Back and forth, back and forth
Click Clack Click Clack Owwh Owwh
Pain, blood, misery comes by the sword,
Open your closed red eyes,
No peace will be found.
Back and forth, back and forth
Click Clack Click Clack Owwh Owwh
Bare fields, dead sheep
Hunger outweighs,
Clear minds in the balance.
Back and forth, back and forth
Click Clack Click Clack Owwh Owwh
No protection, step away
From where you hide,
You have made your choice.
Back and forth, back and forth
Click Clack Click Clack Owwh Owwh
body swaying, head bobbling
With the rhythm of the war drums.
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Re: Possessed Poet
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by emystar on
Sunday, 22nd February 2009 @ 11:53:20 PM AEST
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Oh me what a sight.
They just boobling around like a chicken with it's head cut off.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Possessed Poet
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 09:37:50 AM AEST
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very good imagery and metaphors. it was a refreshing, hyper-reality write which was original as well. good job.
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Re: Possessed Poet
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 09:04:32 PM AEST
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*applauds the imagery*
Excellent, excellent, excellent. Not only could I see this, I could hear it. You did a great job!
Thank you,
Tim |
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Re: Possessed Poet
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by shelby on
Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 09:27:11 PM AEST
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OOOO yes this rocks! I also can feel it, see it , hear it, damn now I want to jump inside your poem lol.
Kickin work here my friend.
Michelle |
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