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Contributed by
faffeee
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Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 12:25:00 AM in AEST
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rolls of fat splurging out
blubber heaving over my body
gloop inside trying to stretch my skin
trying to escape but
something wants to keep it in
something wants to make it bulge
its not me
i want it out
i want to cut it out
starvation just cant seem to work
i try my hardest
push my willpower to its limit
the hunger rumbles inside me
like lightning piercing through me
it collides with grumbling thunder
yet still this hideous body holds its shape
and all around the food calls my name
it wants me to devour it
i want to gobble it down
i want to satisfy this hunger
food will make it right
i know it will
until
the snack i promise myself will be a small one
turns into a stuffing competition
my head rings with warning bells
but my hunger greedily grabs control
and then i watch as layers of
pure
dripping
greasy
bulging
lumps
F A T
expand and balloon
with absolutely no-one to blame
but me
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2003-03-24 00:25:00]
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 01:04:26 AM AEST
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hmm.. i understand you and wish to say to you, it is the beauty of your soul that shines in this write, "You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments that stand out, the moments when you have really lived, are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love." ~Henry Drummond~ as you have done so beautifully in this poem, warm welcome to ypdc, i look forward to your next poem:) hugs nessa
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by kolbrun on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 08:48:46 AM AEST
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| awww.... so very beautiful... :) |
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 11:28:06 AM AEST
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your write brings back memories i am still fighting that battle..but i have learned to accept who i am..your write is very good
Sharon |
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by faffeee on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 02:22:03 PM AEST
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| thanks, i hope ur recovering from that long hard battle, for me it seems to come and go but its always present. u speak words of wisdom!! katie xxx |
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by wyrd_faerie on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 02:41:20 PM AEST
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| ooh...this is so sad...i know what you mean...i have been there... |
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