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A write to war
Contributed by
ShaonKra
on
Sunday, 22nd February 2009 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Victory is far from all bliss
We loose lives despite who wins
As souls dissolve into deaths kiss
Why do we have to fight
A war to regain peace
When we're stronger to unite
Our pride denies defeat..
Does a flag in hostile soil
Show a nation to take a stand?
Fighting a war, for oil
Upon someone else's land
Do two wrongs make it right?
Is there any other way?
Protests may ignite
But we are still deprived our 'say'
When the battle cries are done
And nuclear clouds accumulate
Nobody could bare to look back at war
And her whorish terrible fate
Copyright ©
ShaonKra
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2009-02-22 05:05:00]
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Re: A write to war
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by venkat on
Sunday, 22nd February 2009 @ 05:27:56 AM AEST
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A good write based on the truth...
venkat
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Re: A write to war
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by PreciousKitten on
Sunday, 22nd February 2009 @ 09:35:13 AM AEST
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| i simply enjoy this poem of yours. this really does speak of the truth. you can't fight the truth, no matter what. good job.=) |
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Re: A write to war
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by kye on
Sunday, 22nd February 2009 @ 01:46:59 PM AEST
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I appreciate a strong opinion in a poet but more so than that - I appreciate reading poetry that can incorporate a strong opinion.
You do have a flourish in your writing.
I'm also happy to read political poetry that I can understand. Thank you.
Kie |
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Re: A write to war
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by purplestary on
Sunday, 22nd February 2009 @ 05:46:25 PM AEST
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| I loved this. It speaks nothing but truth. |
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Re: A write to war
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 10:04:20 AM AEST
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well said! the truth is so obvious, and yet so obscured...
-phil |
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