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king carnivore
Contributed by
SpLeaF
on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 11:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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shredded skin
committed sin
dying within
killing them
blowing brains
cutting veins
bloody stains
gone insane
burning skin
stabbing in
starving thin
killed again
what the hell is wrong with me
killing everybody that I meet
every person on the street
every victim becomes my meat
you see my work its filled with gore
half alive but feeling sore
ate up your brains still hungry for more
I guess you can call me king carnivore
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SpLeaF
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2003-03-23 23:45:00]
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Re: king carnivore
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by Lia on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 12:25:40 AM AEST
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well...uhm...hmmmm...yea...well..ok?
kinda an itty bitty weensy bit scary..ok..maybe a bit more than that! |
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Re: king carnivore
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 08:30:29 AM AEST
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I will have to make sure never to get on your bad side!! The poem is a bit alarming. Not sure if I like it or not.
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Re: king carnivore
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 11:32:26 AM AEST
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rather scary not sure how i feel about this one
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