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take me away
Contributed by
bigbadblinkybill
on
Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 06:16:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
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if a man can clense himself,
i would bathe away in glee,
i would take away the hardships,
and take you away with me.
if i could change a single thing,
it would be me and you,
i would stop all the hardships
that leave me black and blue.
but as we know the world not right
and whispers will be told
the swirling mist of uncertainty
will stop us growing old.
so as i write this poem
this fairy tail of woe
the tears well up inside my eyes
and wish it wasn't so
but as i progress forward
and take these steps without
i look at what of might have been
and that i have no doubt.
but nowadays i am different
i have no pain to feel
i finally have found myself
and all the wounds have healed
so as i am the man of truth
i will tell you right away
no matter what you do to me
i'll live another day.
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bigbadblinkybill
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2009-02-21 18:16:05]
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Re: take me away
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 06:57:08 PM AEST
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a good poem, it flowed well and had some nice content.
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Re: take me away
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 10:12:57 PM AEST
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I liked the flow and the positive attitude.... keep it up
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