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You used the Key.

Contributed by mystic_wonderland on Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 02:40:14 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I thought you were sent to me
I really really believed you where here for me
But now I see you don't care
Dammit its just not fair.

You say you love me, you say you care, you say you'll always be there.
I thought you'd be the one to wipe away my tears take all the pain away
but instead you gave me tears and didn't even bother to give me a tissue
You cant even see how deep my love is for you, you wont even bring up the issue.

All the pills in the world cant take away this pain
The pain I feel so deep inside that no one understands
No one ever will...I scream to God for help , For Strength For his hand
but there's nothing there
No one cares.

The one I love has a lock on my heart and can hurt it anytime you want
But your supposed to hide the key
Why are'nt you here for me?
I realize now that you just don't care
even though I do not think it is fair
I understand you will not change not even for me
I wanted to believe but now I just cant.
You used the key. And then you hurt me.....................

Copyright © mystic_wonderland ... [ 2009-02-21 14:40:14]
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Re: You used the Key. (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Sunday, 22nd February 2009 @ 07:03:03 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC. It's great to have you here. and a warm welcome back to writing. This was a very sad and emotional write.

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