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Peregrinate Wisher
Contributed by
kye
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Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 12:08:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Simpering flower fall
From heights above the sea
Close your every petal
From pasts not meant to be
Christened from the loam
Where vines are twisted dry
Drift on towards the sunset
Where whitened beaches lie
Redundant in your yearnings
Of angels plumed and down
Enthralled by flushing blossoms
Of pigments unrenowned
Seized to passions grand
Amongst the soaring high
Past each born creation
Amongst the grand lanai
Now settle into valleys
A crevice from the flow
My peregrinate wisher
Blushed in journey’s glow
Copyright ©
kye
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2009-02-21 12:08:50]
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Re: Peregrinate Wisher
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 05:02:14 PM AEST
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Hmmmmm... methinks amongst the brilliant imagery and the trip through such beauty there is more hidden meaning within the analogies. I honestly don't know quite what it is but I enjoyed it nevertheless.
Thank you for an enjoyable read.
Tim
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Re: Peregrinate Wisher
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 07:10:08 PM AEST
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beautiful imagery and beautiful words, good work.
-phil |
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Re: Peregrinate Wisher
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 10:51:22 PM AEST
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Beautifully written......
Jenni |
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Re: Peregrinate Wisher
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by ShaonKra on
Sunday, 22nd February 2009 @ 03:06:15 PM AEST
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Good poetry, very natural style that just tickles the tounge, keep it up
-ShaonKra- |
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Re: Peregrinate Wisher
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by venkat on
Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 09:52:30 AM AEST
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My dearest Kie, the poem from first line to last line created fantastic images in my mind...
I read it twice to feel the flow of your conciousness and found that the experience behind
the words is sweet and beautiful. I love it.. :-)venkat |
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Re: Peregrinate Wisher
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by dark_poet on
Thursday, 26th February 2009 @ 07:58:28 PM AEST
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thanks for your comment on my piece. i appreciate it.
this piece has beautiful imagery and its short and sweet. the emotion is on point from start to finish. for someone who just started out writing(i noticed only 2 posts by you), it was fantastic. the structure and flow was on point. i could not spot any flaws with this piece you have written. excellent job!
now i wish i could write like you haha :D
take care |
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Re: Peregrinate Wisher
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by lnnie on
Sunday, 8th March 2009 @ 01:48:03 PM AEST
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Thanks for your very very thoughtful comments.
I have read wisher and moonlight. I agree with the
brilliantcy you have in writing. Your poems litterally shine on the page. Wish I could do that the way you do it.
Looking for more, as you write. |
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Re: Peregrinate Wisher
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by emystar on
Friday, 13th March 2009 @ 10:16:31 PM AEST
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Eloquently beautiful.
huggs,
emy
welcome home girl. |
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Re: Peregrinate Wisher
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by elle on
Tuesday, 5th May 2009 @ 07:33:03 PM AEST
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such depth of emotion. . . truly beautiful. . .
your poem brings back fond memories of dandelion seedlings floating on the wind
of childhood wishes. . . shall we. . . make a wish? peace. elle |
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Re: Peregrinate Wisher
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Sunday, 7th June 2009 @ 04:00:27 PM AEST
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| Vivid and surreal. Makes the reader read the words and search their feelings. |
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