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When We Are Done
Contributed by
Balmain_Tiger
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Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 07:33:53 AM in AEST
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How we ask when we know
And if our life is on show
Are these people kind to me
What is it that I really see
Questions for time to come
Until then we only hum
To the sounds from our heart
To know if this is where we start
When we receive we will know
What it was we had on show
And to whom we treated well
That in our lives we did not sell
I only know my time today
And for you I have this to say
A kindly soul you are I see
Remain like this and get no fee
Be one with your heart
And none will fear when you fart
And yes the time will really come
For you and me when we are done
Saturday, 16 August 2008
9:08:15 AM
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Re: When We Are Done
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 10:32:33 AM AEST
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good effort, it flowed well and was witty.
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Re: When We Are Done
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 01:07:55 PM AEST
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I very much agree.
Great stuff. Nice work
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