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Fog
Contributed by
crow6279
on
Friday, 20th February 2009 @ 05:49:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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The fog envelopes...enfolding
clutching at me with detached attention
Obscuring my vision...hiding what's real
while masking my fitful dreams
Distorted...it leads me along...leads me alone
always so near the precipice
Whispering wisps of insane lucidity
making sense of the senseless and inane
My thoughts echo off of it...repeating
making me nod in agreement
Providing false comfort in my delusions
surrounding me...filling me
Movements disguised...visions misshapened
I scoff that there could be others
If so...why aren't they here with me
insulated and solitary...confined
The drops on my skin...moisture
feeding my soul with tears from the gods
I rub them in quickly to sate my thirst
never seeing the crimsom stains
Footsteps in the distance...so familiar
keeping pace with my unsteady gait
Are they following or leading...receding
this stony path so biting...so inviting
My eyes see only the reflections...perceptions
of what I pretend once was and yet to be
While inside my heart is crumbling
dying and drying...at a tremolo beat
What if it dissipates...dispersing
dissolving into nothing more
Will disclosure mean redemption or rejection
scars on the inside finally exposed
Is this all that's left...merely remnants
pieces and fragments torn asunder
Feeding upon me to sate its own hunger
until all that's left is...the fog
Copyright ©
crow6279
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2009-02-20 17:49:49]
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Re: Fog
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by elle on
Friday, 20th February 2009 @ 06:09:38 PM AEST
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| very awesome flow & verse. love the depth. . . welcome back. peace. elle |
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Re: Fog
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th February 2009 @ 06:18:32 PM AEST
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a very good write to kick off your comeback! the imagery was lucid and flowed very well, good work.
-phil |
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Re: Fog
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by shelby on
Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 10:24:37 PM AEST
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Hugs you, I am so glad we are back in touch!
You my dear have not missed one beat with the poetry. This is as vivid and perfect as ever.
Though it is touched by sadness, I hope you are ok?
Chat at me friend!!
I will also go see if I can find your other work as we discussed.
Hugs
Michelle |
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