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My Prison Within
Contributed by
kims4ever
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Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
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Here i sit all alone, about to break, almost gone.
I struggle to move but don't think I can, bonded by the pains and sorrows of man.
I sit and wait for a sign, I sit and wait, but only in decline.
Your searing heands, your deadly hate, your warming love decide my fate.
My sorrow is heavy, my hope is blinking, my mind depraved, my soul is sinking.
I see the world, and try to yell, hoping to be heard, either from heaven or from hell.
Is this real? Or just a dream? I'll never know, or so it seems.
I am the key, but the lock as well, you cannot hold me, and yet i am held.
Time is my captor, my kill as well, tears are my salvation, my way out of this cell.
I feel no remorse, I will never give in, and so i sit alone, in my prison within.
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Re: My Prison Within
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 08:28:12 AM AEST
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What a fantastic poem! I love the imagery. Great work!!
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Re: My Prison Within
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 11:35:21 AM AEST
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great write
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Re: My Prison Within
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by kitten1785 on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 03:09:11 PM AEST
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| this is indeed a great poem |
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Re: My Prison Within
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 09:47:50 PM AEST
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| I do believe i read this at the apartments. I like it, babe. 'sgood stuff. You write such dark things... |
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Re: My Prison Within
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by Jaylee123 on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 12:50:05 AM AEST
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| This a Hell of a poem!!!!!! How Lucky kim must be!!!! Jaylee |
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Re: My Prison Within
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by PhantomsLDY on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 02:04:34 AM AEST
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| Steve this is good maybe too good:) |
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Re: My Prison Within
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by PhantomsBBYgrl on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 06:34:12 PM AEST
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This is a good write! I hope to see more coming from you! Im a very lucky girl to have someone like you! Instead of me being your gift your mine.
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Re: My Prison Within
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by juliette on
Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 02:52:01 AM AEST
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This poem made me feel such a rainbow of emotions. I have circumstances in my life that you have mimicked to a tee. This is very expressive and a truly emotional read. Thanks for sharing!
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Re: My Prison Within
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by norticus on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 03:02:33 PM AEST
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Stay there in your little prison cell. It seems to breed nice poetry.
3.9 on the Nortiscale
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Re: My Prison Within
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by swiftsouljah on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 02:25:00 PM AEST
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| wow... just yeah... things ive written so fabulously expressed in such a different way |
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Re: My Prison Within
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by Solnubis on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 10:00:42 AM AEST
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| Very well written, could relate. |
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Re: My Prison Within
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by lovesucks on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 11:02:35 AM AEST
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Such heartfelt pain....God, I have been there so many, too many times. Thank you for sharing.....You have such expressive talent.
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Re: My Prison Within
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by lovesucks on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 11:30:18 PM AEST
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I felt this one, and have been there way too many times. Excellent write.
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