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The Calling
Contributed by
thursday
on
Friday, 20th February 2009 @ 09:30:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Something inside calls me,
Can't seem to let go.
I feel your touch,
Can it be real?
Trapped inside without a life,
Is this my escape?
Just going through the motions,
Everyday seems like a blur.
Nothing seems to change,
Maybe I'm living for nothing.
You call out to me,
Should I answer back?
What is there to lose,
But the simple monotony of everyday life without a meaning.
I listen to the void,
Yet it's filled with harmony,
It allures my senses.
It's time for a change...
to be continued...
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thursday
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2009-02-20 09:30:42]
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Re: The Calling
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by mcnickname on
Tuesday, 29th October 2013 @ 05:34:10 PM AEST
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| i may be too drunk to be of any use but apart from the fact i cant identify with the subject matter i did enjoy. Look up my friend! Let the continuation continue! :) |
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Re: The Calling
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by 143 on
Sunday, 24th November 2013 @ 10:20:44 PM AEST
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| good poem |
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Re: The Calling
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by EveAlone on
Tuesday, 24th December 2013 @ 01:34:48 PM AEST
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I don't know if the to be continued... is a legit to be continued or part of the poem, but as part of the poem it really hammers home the direction I feel you poem was going. Especially when you speak about it being time for a change, and then it ends with to be continued. I like that a lot.
I also like your line "Trapped inside without a life"
It paints a hauntingly beautiful picture depending on your interpretation. Good job. |
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