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~This Is How I Feel~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
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Thursday, 19th February 2009 @ 08:52:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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~~^~~
No matter the time or the distance apart,
Your love will forever fill my heart,
On my lips, your kiss I will always taste
Your breath I will always feel on my face...........
No matter how rough my life may seem,
The knowledge that I am loved makes my heart beam.
With your voice you manage to calm my stormy seas
Your touch is as comforting as a gentle breeze.
The one thing that transcends all time and space
Is the never ending beauty that radiates from your face.
Even though situations keep us apart for months at a time
I am comforted by the knowledge that you are mine
Matters not what tribulations I endure
Of one thing I can always be sure.
You’re always there when I need a shoulder,
With you, this love, I never need to smolder
When daily life tries to push me to my knees
I know my sustaining strength comes from thee.
Never again to be pained by an empty heart,
You took care of that from the very start
The winds of reality may some day blow
And through the windows our dreams may go
But until that time, we’ll enjoy the love we share
Thank you, my friend, for being the one to care.
~~^~~
19.02.09
Copyright ©
Jenni_K
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2009-02-19 20:52:39]
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Re: ~This Is How I Feel~
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by Recyclebin on
Thursday, 19th February 2009 @ 09:42:21 PM AEST
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Wow... that was smooth yet intense.
This was really well written.
The winds of reality may some day blow
And through the windows our dreams may go
Those lines caught me.
~Bin~ |
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Re: ~This Is How I Feel~
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by Voice of the Silent on
Thursday, 19th February 2009 @ 10:42:11 PM AEST
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Great write very nice flow
congrats to both you and deadwriter
hope to read more soon-kelly |
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Re: ~This Is How I Feel~
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by shelby on
Friday, 20th February 2009 @ 05:36:52 PM AEST
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This is truly refreshing and beautiful to read. You captured a perfect feeling and it meshed together perfectly, you two always write well together.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: ~This Is How I Feel~
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th February 2009 @ 07:31:02 PM AEST
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Very beautiful and endearing, you two!!! Thank you for an enjoyable read.
Take care,
Tim |
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Re: ~This Is How I Feel~
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by venkat on
Friday, 20th February 2009 @ 09:58:20 PM AEST
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Wow ..wonderfully refreshing..
"one thing that transcends all time and space
Is the never ending beauty that radiates from your face"
Such a great impression in the mind..Wow..very sweet and lovely friendship.
God bless.. may you live long :-) venkat
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Re: ~This Is How I Feel~
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 04:09:24 AM AEST
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one of the most beautiful poems that i've read in a while. it just all seemed to work together seamlessly. i could tell that a lot of thought had gone into picking each word of each line, exemplified in this short bit:
'The one thing that transcends all time and space
Is the never ending beauty that radiates from your face.'
another highlight was the final stanza, which combined imagery with a beautiful fluency. a quite simply superb write.
-phil |
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Re: ~This Is How I Feel~
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 09:03:07 PM AEST
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| This is a very beautiful write. I wish I had a friendship like that that wasn't long distance. Great job!! |
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Re: ~This Is How I Feel~
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by SirCallower on
Monday, 30th March 2009 @ 05:35:00 AM AEST
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A great piece.
had a nice flow to it, and you can really feel the passion here.
good job guys |
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Re: ~This Is How I Feel~
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Tuesday, 9th June 2009 @ 07:38:14 PM AEST
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Intimacy at its best, closeness of a sweet breath.
Lonliness is departed by the closeness of two souls.
familiar voices with a loving touch goes a long way.
third paragraph with a face
transcending through time everlasting.
A friendship or love shall never pass us by,
we are handed trials together.Emptyness of hearts
filled with a strength for each other.
Let our out stretched hands also push out the pain,
the pain we must endure through this life.
dreams do wonder passed windows of a nights love
Maybe a knights love, sounds from a billowing
of a great stallions horse.
Deadwriter and Jenni_K keep up the writing
may your words hold dear for years, maybe
decades to come. Regards Wesley_Dale_ Willis.....:o) |
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