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Winter Fruit
Contributed by
Petals_and_Tears
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Thursday, 19th February 2009 @ 04:12:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Skeleton hands;
reaching for the sky,
begging for the spring.
Creaking joints;
that rustle in the wind,
that cackle after me.
Barren and bare;
fruit have all fallen,
buried and covered
under layers of purity
and innocence,
nestled deep below
the ever growing snow.
Wrap your hands around mine,
let me be the fruit to your snow.
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Petals_and_Tears
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2009-02-19 16:12:25]
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Re: Winter Fruit
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by elle on
Friday, 20th February 2009 @ 10:55:47 AM AEST
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| hi. . . this is a lovely poem & speaks to me of hope & renewal. I really liked it. peace. elle |
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Re: Winter Fruit
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by shelby on
Friday, 20th February 2009 @ 05:41:06 PM AEST
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welcome to ypdc, I am not around much but am glad I stopped by this poem. Very descriptive and beautiful work. I too am wishing for spring and a total rebirth heart and soul.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Winter Fruit
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by kye on
Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 12:19:00 PM AEST
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Very vivid imagery.
"Creaking joints;
that rustle in the wind,
that cackle after me."
This (above) is inspiration at its finest.
Kie
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Re: Winter Fruit
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 05:52:56 PM AEST
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I really like the imagery and the analogy between the nature and the hope for love from someone cold without it.
Nicely done.
Thank you for an enjoyable read.
Tim
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