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what i saw
Contributed by
lostforgood
on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I walk in the room
And its an endless tomb
Where everyone drinks
And no one thinks
I know I shouldn't be there
But I really do not care
My friends are there to talk to
And lots of people that are new
The guy I care for is running about
He's drunk off his @$$ while people shout
This pretty girl is downing a lot
She ends up poisened and help is sought out
The night goes along
As more things go wrong
But I'm still having fun
That's why I don't run
People start to leave or pass out
At times I just want to shout
Then there's me that gets out of it
But I tell everyone I'll be fine in a bit
They all think that I am tired
But that's not the case, I feel so wired
My body is limp
And I can't even move
Everything is getting dim
The room is spinning
And death is winning
They pick me up and take me to a bed
But my tears I refuse to shed
It hurts so bad
And I am so sad
My head is dense
And things make no sense
He stays with me to make sure I'm okay
He talks with me as I lay
But through it all he molests me
How is it I let this be
I really try to stop him from doing this
But he is just to strong for me when I'm in my endless abyss
The pain starts to lessen
But he keeps on messin
I finally get back my strength and push him away
I know that I cannot stay
I get up and wander around slowly getting over the pain
But then it's time to lay down again
Because now I really do need sleep
I fear I have fallen in to deep
But now I lay down with a friend
Who's love to me he does send
Now I feel protected
And I my thoughts I have collected
Copyright ©
lostforgood
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2003-03-23 22:05:00]
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Re: what i saw
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by XXXsilvervoodooXXX on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 11:20:01 PM AEST
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| good stuff |
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Re: what i saw
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 11:45:50 AM AEST
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strong write..good work
Sharon |
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Re: what i saw
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 01:28:01 PM AEST
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Wow... great way to tell a story! Good stuff. Blessed be,
~ Moonlit Angel |
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