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I won't call it love, just yet.
Contributed by
HonestInk
on
Wednesday, 18th February 2009 @ 07:26:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Tomorrow holds your smile,
voice, and everything I need
to get me through my day.
If I wasn't so unsure of forever
I'd promise you everything.
Every word I whisper is our secret.
So close to perfection,
I'm scared to look down for a second
and see it's not me after all.
A past doesn't fade fast,
with new faces to hold
it's hard not to second guess promises.
Luck is a theory, and love isn't true
unless the person in possession
hasn't a clue.
And I've never been more lost.
Copyright ©
HonestInk
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2009-02-18 19:26:03]
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Re: I won't call it love, just yet.
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by Petals_and_Tears on
Thursday, 19th February 2009 @ 07:51:21 PM AEST
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*sigh* reminds me of someone
such a small world when it comes to love
if they dont have "a clue" its so much harder
but then it hurts like hell giving them a clue and being rejected
sorry i go off on tagents alot
i like ur poem
its short sweet and to the point
sometmes it doesnt take lots of words to say what you mean to say |
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Re: I won't call it love, just yet.
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by Fireheart on
Saturday, 28th February 2009 @ 06:09:41 PM AEST
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it's short but truly the meaning is right on it. i love the ending it was a very nice way of closing it. nicely
~* Frenchy*~ |
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