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Ode to a Rose
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Wednesday, 18th February 2009 @ 05:40:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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I clutch you with a fierce hope,
a selfish intensity,
crushing your fragile arms
to feel the kiss of your teeth
those green knives,
those tiny deaths,
O, sanguine perfection,
create for me a field of
your jagged armour,
decapitate your cusp of beauty
and leave me your fatal corpse,
that holy stem,
my morbid love,
so I may bleed, or sleep.
Darling flower,
you are too merciful,
- such shallow stabbings!
If only your were made of glass,
I'd marry a million of you
and bathe in your pristine pieces,
your colorless shards,
and I'd stain you with my love,
that endless wound,
as red as you once were.
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2009-02-18 17:40:40]
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Re: Ode to a Rose
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th February 2009 @ 06:09:43 PM AEST
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| I totally agree with your authors note. I prefer the black rose to the ruby red rose. this is a great write! |
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Re: Ode to a Rose
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 18th February 2009 @ 07:01:24 PM AEST
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Uh, Wow, Stephy. It's been a while since I read something from you, and boy! Am I glad you're back! It is a treat to read your words again.
As usual, I love the stagger in this, the images, the POW, and all of the minute messages and meanings.
I have missed reading your words!
Welcome back!
*huge hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: Ode to a Rose
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by Petals_and_Tears on
Thursday, 19th February 2009 @ 07:36:22 PM AEST
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ur authors note is so true . . . u love their bad points more than the good
its really nicely done
i really like the way you write , beautiful |
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