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My Princess
Contributed by
roieno
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Tuesday, 17th February 2009 @ 09:29:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My Princess
You're the princess I fight for on the battle field
With hardly any shield to protect me from the pain
As I keep falling again, and again
surrounded by fire... wishing for rain
Thoughts coming to my mind telling me to stop
But i keep telling myself no, "I can not stop"
Cuz your've got me trapped by stealing my heart
Now all i have to do is keep up with my heart
Desperatly needing to take the last step with a goodbye
As i see you changing my world with a blink of an eye
That is something I can not deny
You put my soul from worst to best
That is why i treasure you as my dearest
When I look in your eyes
I question myself where are the lies?
Then I realize you really are the angel sent from above
To take care of me and be my sweetest love
By:Roieno
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roieno
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2009-02-17 21:29:58]
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Re: My Princess
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th February 2009 @ 09:52:16 AM AEST
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a sweet, compassionate write. i particularly liked the line 'As i see you changing my world with a blink of an eye', it perfectly sums up teenage fantasy romance i think. good work.
-phil
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Re: My Princess
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by USCGman27 on
Friday, 20th February 2009 @ 02:00:00 AM AEST
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| I could feel how you feel just by reading it. It is a every powerful and meaning full poem. |
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Re: My Princess
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by Fireheart on
Saturday, 28th February 2009 @ 11:13:15 AM AEST
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| awww.. this is very sweet indeed. fighting for her love. n she's the one that gives ya strength. i loved it. nicely done here. |
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Re: My Princess
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by MusicksPrincessa on
Monday, 15th November 2010 @ 03:56:30 PM AEST
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| I really liked it :P |
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