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you took it from ME!!!
Contributed by
roxie
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Monday, 16th February 2009 @ 10:13:33 PM in AEST
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just confused of what happens next
where do i go from here
and why do feel so durty
you say it's not your fault, THEN WHO'S FAULT IS IT!!
i was the one who said nothing
i stayed QUITE!!
when i could have took it to the police but what would they had done??
they couldn't take the pain away he stole every thing from me
i will never be a VIRGIN again!
no one cares they only care about them selfs
he sits there in class as if nothing happened!!
i'm sooooo broken, i can never be fixed
can you give me my confides back, can you give me my dignity
you say well you should have said some thing
BUT you dont know how it feels to be ashame of yourself
that it even got that far to where i couldn't control myself
i blame myself every day!
i'm the one that has to wake up knowing i did nothing
he RAPED me and now his telling his friend like i liked it or something
when really i hated every moment of it
why ??? why???
why ME?? why was i too weak to stop him??
why would my so called best friend leaven me there by my self??
why can't i just forget about it??
why do i let him still have that power??
why can't i just move on with my life??
all these questions NEVER answers!!
i'm alone!!!
i never thought i could hate someone with so much passion!!
it's my fault i'm an idiot
i hate even talking about that night
i feel so much hate now
i'm never going to be the same
you take my innocents away!!!
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roxie
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Re: you took it from ME!!!
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 17th February 2009 @ 01:14:50 AM AEST
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Very sad but great writing.
I can certainly relate to this.
It's not the world but the evil in it.
I don't know how old you are but I bet he was older.
Nothing personal guys, this comment isn't based on any of our men here at ypdc.
Take the anger and write, write, write. It gets easier over time but then when you least espect it flash backs come.
I just hang onto God very strong and he carries the load now. i know even tho I don't fully understand why me but I do know God is always steady to hold me in his arms and that helps make it not matter any more.
big luv, huggs, prayer, blessings,
emy |
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Re: you took it from ME!!!
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by Butterflyperfect on
Tuesday, 17th February 2009 @ 10:48:57 AM AEST
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There is so much emotion that comes across in this. You have a great point as well... it is hard to think it will be okay and feels like you lost everything. I can only imagine how you feel because I have not been in that situation. Never the less evil is the world sometimes...
There is this quote by Edith Wharton, "There are two ways of spreading light- to be the candle or the mirror reflecting it."
Lets try to apply it to this... The candle is the event and the mirror is how others see the event... It is horribe to see, but far worse to experience...
Now take the quote into a positive light... Let it make you a better person... Yes you will remember this and you won't be able to forget it, but let it help you understand that you survived... and that not only makes you strong, but a survivor... so be the light to others, and help them as they will help you. Don't reflect your feelings into a dark hole that will make you think of yourself as nothing. Because you are not nothing...
well I don't know if I am getting across what I am trying to say, but keep writing... It was an eye-opening read.
Take Care of Yourself.
With Love,
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Re: you took it from ME!!!
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th February 2009 @ 12:37:59 PM AEST
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| Writing down your feelings is a great way to release bad energy.You did it so well that it hurts to read your words. |
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