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an affirmation of life
Contributed by
elle
on
Monday, 16th February 2009 @ 02:33:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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. . . a portal appears
streaming with light. illuminated
& falling
. . . falling. . . falling. . .
onward, towards
first breath & sight.
once this reality grows
to be
mine. . .
to be
thine. . .
there will be precious methods
forgotton. . .
an existence abandoned,
left behind. . .
come whatever
don't be afraid to be.
for life is love
manifest.
Gods' theory
sets us free.
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-02-16 14:33:40]
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Re: an affirmation of life
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by emystar on
Monday, 16th February 2009 @ 03:21:50 PM AEST
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Gods' theory
sets us free.
These last two lines sum it all up.
really good write.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: an affirmation of life
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th February 2009 @ 04:07:55 PM AEST
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a vibrant, original write, good work.
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Re: an affirmation of life
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 16th February 2009 @ 08:34:51 PM AEST
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Have to agree with Emy... those last two lines speak volumes... Well done...Good imagery
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Re: an affirmation of life
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th February 2009 @ 12:35:35 AM AEST
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| This has a spirit of beauty abounding throughout. You always write with amazing thoughts and inspiration. |
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