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we are one
Contributed by
elle
on
Monday, 16th February 2009 @ 09:12:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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reaching. . .
my hands become shadow
an extension of time
& sunsets' flight.
evening encircles shadow
until both become one. . .
a dim scattering
of twilight.
together, as we meet
sounds & voices
melt into the silence
of quiet appetite.
we touch as softly
as night graces shadow
our colours blending.
palettes' delight.
my eyes. . . opening
remembering
soft touch.
secret respite.
now dawn. . .
I, once shadow.
now dawn. . .
you, once night.
Copyright ©
elle
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2009-02-16 09:12:28]
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Re: we are one
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th February 2009 @ 10:51:22 AM AEST
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i like your style of writing :)))
cheers |
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Re: we are one
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th February 2009 @ 04:43:42 PM AEST
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wow, this is incredible. i particularly liked this bit:
together, as we meet
sounds & voices
melt into the silence
of quiet appetite.
the imagery and sound of this bit was first class, great work.
-phil |
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Re: we are one
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th February 2009 @ 12:48:48 AM AEST
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I really love the way you blend that natrual love into the nature of night into day. Your knack for imagery is great!!!
I rarely make suggestion, however, I have one....or maybe more of a request from a selfish fan. It would be great to hear an audio post of a few of your poems. :D
Take care,
Tim
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Re: we are one
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by OdinRajer on
Saturday, 2nd November 2013 @ 12:20:35 PM AEST
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| very nice, wonderful vision |
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